Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this problem? How can this problem be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays,
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overpopulation
consider
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is considered
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as
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an
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important
problem
that
happened
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is happening
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in many places
such
as the major urban
centers
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centres
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in several countries around the world.
However
,
this
problem
has diverse reasons that caused
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it
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, so the
people
and
govemment
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government
should find a solution to
decraese
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decrease
this
problem
. On the one hand, the main reason
of
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for
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the
population
is the chance of better jobs in the
development
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developing
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cities
. To illustrate, the jobs that
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are offerd
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offerd
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offered
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in the
cities
provide higher
salary
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salaries
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compared to the jobs in
countryside
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the countryside
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due to
the
advancence
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advance
advanced
advancing
technology in the main
cities
. The higher level of education might
be
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play a role in overpopulation.
For example
, the parents wish to provide the best education for their children, and
this
desire
available
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is available
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in the technological
cities
better than the underdevelopment areas which will make them
to moving
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move
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to
cities
to provide
this
chance for their children.
On the other hand
, the primary solution for
this
issue is
by
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to
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make the
cities
larger and have more facilities that
needed
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are needed
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to overcome the
population
.
For instance
, if the government spend
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money to improve the places for the
people
, that will lead to
lower
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a lower
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the
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population
in those
cities
and the the overpopulation issue will become
overlooked
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an overlooked
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problem
.
Furthermore
, the
govemment
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government
and the
adminstration
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administration
could improve the facilities in the other
ares
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areas
which will lead the
people
to distribute in more than just one city. That will make the
population
will decrease
compare
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compared
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to just one
development
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developed
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city for all the
people
.
To sum up
,
this
issue has its reasons and the government should not
overlooked
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overlook
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the solutions that
mentioned
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are mentioned
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and work
in
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apply
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to decrease the
population
around the world.
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