The line graph illustrates the amount of visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries over a period of eighteen years between 1996 and 2014.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph illustrates the amount of visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries over a period of eighteen years between 1996 and 2014.

The line graph provides information about how much travellers in Australia, the USA, the UK, Japan and China spent

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New Zealand from 1996 to 2014

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, the figures for spending in Australia,

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the USA

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and China increased significantly over the period of 18 years and Australia spent most in 6 countries ,

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Japanese people spent

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the same expense in 1996 and 2014. Australian citizens just spent roughly 1000

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for travelling to New Zealand in 1996,

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the expense witnessed a significant rise in 2006 at approximately 2500

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which was its highest point and fluctuated for the 2006-2014 period. There was a moderate decline in spending money to travel to New Zealand at 200

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in 20014. The amount of expense in the US, China and Japan went up to 1800

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, 500

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and 1200

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respectively in 2010, 2004 and 2002 respectively.

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, the expenditure in the UK decreased significantly in 2002 at 250

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then

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increased sharply to 1000

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in 2014

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

169 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

illustrates
visitor spend
over a period of
eighteen years
between 1996 and 2014
general trend
observed
increase
decrease
fluctuations
a breakdown of
spending habits
comparison
highest spenders
lowest spenders
possible reasons
economic conditions
tourism promotions
significant events
specific significant peaks
drops in spending
corresponding years
impact of external factors
global financial crisis
natural disasters
summarizing
overall trend
implications
tourism industry

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Some people think that it is good for spending money on finding life on other planets, while others believe it is a waste and governments should focus on problems on the earth. Discuss both views and give your opinions.