The line graph illustrates the amount of visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries over a period of eighteen years between 1996 and 2014.
The line graph provides information about how much travellers in Australia, the USA, the UK, Japan and China spent
to
New Zealand from 1996 to 2014
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Overall
, the figures for spending in Australia, USA
, Correct article usage
the USA
UK
and China increased significantly over the period of 18 years and Australia spent most in 6 countries , Correct article usage
the UK
however
Japanese people spent with
the same expense in 1996 and 2014.
Australian citizens just spent roughly 1000 Change preposition
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NZS
for travelling to New Zealand in 1996, then
the expense witnessed a significant rise in 2006 at approximately 2500 NZS
which was its highest point and fluctuated for the 2006-2014 period. There was a moderate decline in spending money to travel to New Zealand at 200 NZS
in 20014. The amount of expense in the US, China and Japan went up to 1800 NZS
, 500 NZS
and 1200 NZS
respectively in 2010, 2004 and 2002 respectively. However
, the expenditure in the UK decreased significantly in 2002 at 250 NZS
, then
increased sharply to 1000 NZS
in 2014Submitted by nguyennguyet.vcu on
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