The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
Pictures illustrate an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and its future development.
Overall
, there will be significant changes. Almost, everything is Linking Words
goint
to change, only the river and main Correct your spelling
going
riads
will stay.
Nowadays scheme is that there are factories, Correct your spelling
roads
main
streets with Correct word choice
and main
the
roundabout. All new stuff is going to concentrate along two lanes. Factories will be replaced by houses, Correct article usage
a
furthermore
Linking Words
ad
plenty of Correct your spelling
and
another buildings
. On the river, which is situated on the North of Norbiton, will be built a bridge. Replace the adjective
another building
other buildings
This
bridge is going to connect Linking Words
industrial
area(where whole facilities is going to Correct article usage
the industrial
construct
) with farmland.
Wrong verb form
be constructed
There
are going to put up a playground, school, medical centre and shops. Correct pronoun usage
They
Vast
majority of empty space is going to Add an article
The vast
full
. Medical Add a missing verb
be full
centre
and shops set up between two Fix the agreement mistake
centres
rounabouts
. Correct your spelling
roundabouts
runabouts
Playground
and school will concentrate on the Correct article usage
The playground
south
East of the river.Capitalize word
South
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