The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
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Pictures illustrate an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and its future development.
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, there will be significant changes. Almost, everything is
goint
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going
to change, only the river and main
riads
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roads
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will stay. Nowadays scheme is that there are factories,
main
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and main
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streets with
the
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a
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roundabout. All new stuff is going to concentrate along two lanes. Factories will be replaced by houses,
furthermore
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ad
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and
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plenty of
another buildings
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. On the river, which is situated on the North of Norbiton, will be built a bridge.
This
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bridge is going to connect
industrial
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the industrial
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area(where whole facilities is going to
construct
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) with farmland.
There
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are going to put up a playground, school, medical centre and shops.
Vast
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majority of empty space is going to
full
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. Medical
centre
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centres
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and shops set up between two
rounabouts
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roundabouts
runabouts
.
Playground
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The playground
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and school will concentrate on the
south
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South
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East of the river.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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