You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the average monthly
temperatures
in Paris
, Dubai, and Sydney.
Overall
, while
the average temperatures
in Paris
and Sydney fluctuate throughout the year, the temperatures
in Dubai remain consistently higher than in Paris
and show a slight overall
increase over 12 months.
In Dubai, temperatures
rise significantly from January to August, peaking at over 35°C
, before dropping sharply to approximately 25°C
by December. Similarly
, Paris
experiences fluctuations in average temperatures
throughout the year. Temperatures
climb steadily, reaching around 20°C
in July and August, before falling significantly to about 5°C
in December.
In contrast
, Sydney follows an opposite trend. Temperatures
decrease notably from January, reaching their lowest point at approximately 15°C
in July. From there, they rise steadily to about 22°C
by December.Submitted by nguyennguyet.vcu on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words temperatures, paris, °c with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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