The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the average monthly
temperatures
in Use synonyms
Paris
, Dubai, and Sydney.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
while
the average Linking Words
temperatures
in Use synonyms
Paris
and Sydney fluctuate throughout the year, the Use synonyms
temperatures
in Dubai remain consistently higher than in Use synonyms
Paris
and show a slight Use synonyms
overall
increase over 12 months.
In Dubai, Linking Words
temperatures
rise significantly from January to August, peaking at over 35Use synonyms
°C
, before dropping sharply to approximately 25Use synonyms
°C
by December. Use synonyms
Similarly
, Linking Words
Paris
experiences fluctuations in average Use synonyms
temperatures
throughout the year. Use synonyms
Temperatures
climb steadily, reaching around 20Use synonyms
°C
in July and August, before falling significantly to about 5Use synonyms
°C
in December.
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In contrast
, Sydney follows an opposite trend. Linking Words
Temperatures
decrease notably from January, reaching their lowest point at approximately 15Use synonyms
°C
in July. From there, they rise steadily to about 22Use synonyms
°C
by December.Use synonyms
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