The given bar chart illustrates the salt intake of males and females in different age groups in an European country in the year 2019.

The given bar chart illustrates the salt intake of males and females in different age groups in an European country in the year 2019.
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The bar chart illustrates the levels of
salt
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consumption per day among
men
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and
women
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across various
age
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groups in a European country in 2019. Units are measured in milligrams.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that
men
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consumed more
salt
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than
women
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and
salt
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intake
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was above the recommended daily amount in most
age
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categories.
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, middle-aged
men
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and
women
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had the highest
intake
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of
salt
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.
While
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young children have the lowest. The
salt
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consumed by the young group was just under 2000
mg
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for boys but only 1500
mg
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for girls aged five and below.
Salt
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intake
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increased to reach the highest amount just about 5000 for
men
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aged 30-39 and
women
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’s
intake
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in
this
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age
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was almost 4000
mg
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. Regarding people aged 40-
49
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the amount of consumption began slightly decreased at about 4500
mg
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for
men
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and 3500
mg
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for
women
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. These decreases continued as
men
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and
women
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aged,
moreover
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, by the
age
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of 70 or more
salt
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consumption became
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the recommended daily
intake
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level for
women
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which was 2300 gm,
while
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the average for
men
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was still higher than the recommended
intake
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at just under 4000
mg
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per day.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words salt, men, women, age, intake, mg with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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