The given bar chart illustrates the salt intake of males and females in different age groups in an European country in the year 2019.
The bar chart illustrates the levels of
salt
consumption per day among Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
across various Use synonyms
age
groups in a European country in 2019. Units are measured in milligrams.
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Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that Linking Words
men
consumed more Use synonyms
salt
than Use synonyms
women
and Use synonyms
salt
Use synonyms
intake
was above the recommended daily amount in most Use synonyms
age
categories. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, middle-aged Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
had the highest Use synonyms
intake
of Use synonyms
salt
. Use synonyms
While
young children have the lowest.
The Linking Words
salt
consumed by the young group was just under 2000 Use synonyms
mg
for boys but only 1500 Use synonyms
mg
for girls aged five and below. Use synonyms
Salt
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intake
increased to reach the highest amount just about 5000 for Use synonyms
men
aged 30-39 and Use synonyms
women
’s Use synonyms
intake
in Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
age
was almost 4000 Use synonyms
mg
.
Regarding people aged 40-Use synonyms
49
the amount of consumption began slightly decreased at about 4500 Add a comma
49,
mg
for Use synonyms
men
and 3500 Use synonyms
mg
for Use synonyms
women
. These decreases continued as Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
aged, Use synonyms
moreover
, by the Linking Words
age
of 70 or more Use synonyms
salt
consumption became Use synonyms
in
the recommended daily Change preposition
apply
intake
level for Use synonyms
women
which was 2300 gm, Use synonyms
while
the average for Linking Words
men
was still higher than the recommended Use synonyms
intake
at just under 4000 Use synonyms
mg
per day.Use synonyms
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