the pie chart below show the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996, 2006 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the pie chart below show the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996, 2006 and 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data in pie charts demonstrates the various languages speaking people in canada every decades starting from 1996 till 2016 for the period of 30 years.
overall
, it can be seen clearly that, english speaker is higher in all these years.
while
on the other hand
non official languages native speakers is increasing with the increasing
rate
in the given periods
whereas
, french speakers are decreasing at decreasing
rate
. English language is highly spoken as it is almost 2/3 in the
year
1996.
whereas
, in the
year
2006 it has quite decreased to 58
percentage
followed by 57
percentage
in 2016.
Additionally
, non official language speaker is increasing at a slow
rate
as it is 17
percentage
in the
year
1996 and 20
percentage
in 2006
also
22
percentage
in the
year
2016.
Furthermore
, french native is decreasing at a
rate
of 1
percentage
in every decade. As it was 23
percentage
in 1996 with one
percentage
decrease it was 22
percentage
in the
year
2006 again with same
percentage
of decrease it was 21
percentage
in the
year
2016.
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