The charts below show the performance of spending on roads and transport in four countries from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagram illustrates the process of Po-erh raw

tea

and ripe

tea

in seven steps.

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overall

view, it can be seen that the first stage is

that

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rae

tea

and ripe

tea

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replacing

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on fire

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a pan and the

last

step is

aging

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raw

tea

and ripe

tea

by storage. On one hand, it can be seen that raw and ripe

tea

is placed on fire for inactivating

anzymes

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enzymes

and rolling them for taking place under the sun for drying.In

eddition

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addition

, after raw and ripe

tea

dried

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is dried

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under

sun

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, raw and ripe

tea

should be

devided

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divided

and

then

raw

tea

is compressed

for making

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to make

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green age for

putting

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in storage to become brown vintage raw

tea

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, after

deviding

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dividing

deciding

, green ripe

tea

have

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fermented by

mold

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mould

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devide

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divide

decide

ripe

tea

and for the

last

stage

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stage,

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it is

copressed

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compressed

to make a pu-reh ripe

tea

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

154 words

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