The line graph below shows changes in the amount and the type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and the type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information, and make comparison where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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This
line graph shows the consumption of fast
foods
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food
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by
Austrailian Teenagers
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Australian teenagers
, With the vertical axes showing the amount of times the meals have been consumed per
year
, Spaning throughout the years
of
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1975 to 2000 on the y axes, With each fast food represented by
color coded
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colour-coded
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lines. The
consuption
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consumption
of fish and chips was at
it's
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its
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highest in the
year
1975 with a hundred fish and chips meals eaten in a
year
, But it started to gradually Decrease with a slight rise in popularity in the
year
1985. Unlike
the
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fish and chips, the consumption of hamburgers and pizza pies started to rapidly
increas
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increase
without pause, Until the
year
of
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1995
where
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when
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pizzas stopped increasing and had an
unchagable
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unchangeable
unshakable
rate of
consuption
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consumption
of over 80 pizzas consumed a
year
even though the
amount
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number
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of burgers eaten each
year
is still increasing to
this
day.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • fast food consumption
  • increase
  • decline
  • trend
  • popularity
  • Australian teenagers
  • hamburgers
  • pizza
  • fish and chips
  • steady rise
  • sharp decline
  • comparison
  • amount and type
  • notable changes
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