The maps show changes in a village from agricultural village in 1995 to a tourist destination now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show changes in a village from agricultural village in 1995 to a tourist destination now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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map illustrates the
Revelution
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Revolution
of Ryemouth village between the year
of
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1995 and the present time, The
villiage
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village
was drawn using simple shapes and colours showing the
farm lands
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farmlands
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and water bodies painted in dark
gray
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grey
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. Starting in the year 1995, The small town consisted of two roads, A housing compound on the far northern
side
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Facing a farmland eastside, Below the farmland a forest park can be located and a hotel
resideng
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residing
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under it, across the street facing the hotel you can visit a small
cozy
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coffee shop and observe the sea on the south
side
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of it, the fish markets are located in the west
side
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near the fishing port with shops on the other
side
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of the port. In the present time
alot
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a lot
of landmarks
has
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drastically changed, Both the farmland and the forest park
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been turned into a golf and tennis court, the hotel is now equipped with a car park, the shops
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a line of
restauraunts
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restaurants
and the markets turned into apartments nearing the sea, The number of houses
also
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increased throughout th years with a new road added for easy access.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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