The maps show changes in a village from agricultural village in 1995 to a tourist destination now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
map illustrates the Linking Words
Revelution
of Ryemouth village between the year Correct your spelling
Revolution
of
1995 and the present time, The Change preposition
apply
villiage
was drawn using simple shapes and colours showing the Correct your spelling
village
farm lands
and water bodies painted in dark Correct your spelling
farmlands
gray
.
Starting in the year 1995, The small town consisted of two roads, A housing compound on the far northern Change the spelling
grey
side
Facing a farmland eastside, Below the farmland a forest park can be located and a hotel Use synonyms
resideng
under it, across the street facing the hotel you can visit a small Correct your spelling
residing
resident
cozy
coffee shop and observe the sea on the south Change the spelling
cosy
side
of it, the fish markets are located in the west Use synonyms
side
near the fishing port with shops on the other Use synonyms
side
of the port.
In the present time Use synonyms
alot
of landmarks Correct your spelling
a lot
has
drastically changed, Both the farmland and the forest park Correct subject-verb agreement
have
had
been turned into a golf and tennis court, the hotel is now equipped with a car park, the shops Wrong verb form
have
became
a line of Wrong verb form
have become
restauraunts
and the markets turned into apartments nearing the sea, The number of houses Correct your spelling
restaurants
also
increased throughout th years with a new road added for easy access.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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