The bar chart below shows the top ten counties for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten counties for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates a ranking
sysetm
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system
of the world's top ten most populated
countries
sorted in an ascending order ranked by their
electricity
production and consumption. Starting with China
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the
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first place with the highest production of electric energy and Utilization, With the US Slightly falling behind in second place, Followed by Russia with a very
noticable
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noticeable
drop in both creating and using
electricity
,
Then
the rest of the
countries
follow in order with slight
diffrences
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differences
bigenning
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beginning
with Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, And
then
Korea sporting the
last
place. Generally, Most
countries
produce more
electricity
than consume, except Germany
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has a
slighly
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slightly
higher rate of consumed energy than produced. Both China and the US have an astronomical demand for
electricity
that
differintiates
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differentiates
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Them from the rest of the
countries
, they seem to have a much
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demand for electric energy and that probably goes back to the population count of these nations.
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