You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend and need some help organizing it. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: Explain why you are writing. Give details about the party. Suggest how your friend can help.

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Dear Raja, I hope

this

email finds

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you in

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apply

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good health. I'm writing

this

letter to get some help for

Dhrumil

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Dhrumil's

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birthday

party

which

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am planning. As you know that Dhrumil is our best friend and his birthday is just

after

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apply

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15 days

therefore

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, therefore

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, I am planning a

surprised

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surprise

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birthday

party

for him as he

his

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moving to

USA

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the USA

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for his higher studies. I have booked the town hall for

party

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a party

the party

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with

the

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capicity

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capacity

of 200

peoples

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people

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for

colse

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ones and

the

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family

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families

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. All the things will be

take

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taken

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cared

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care

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the

manageing

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managing

management

team of the hall.

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, decoration , music and so on. So , I want a favour from you to make a close friend list which we have to invite

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party

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the party

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and as you are a graphic designer you have to make

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invitation card for the

party

. And we

also

have to figure out catering as the town hall

are

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not providing

this

service.

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you remember the catering name your father called

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for

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your

brothers

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brother's

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wedding the food was delicious so I am thinking of that to book for the

party

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Yor

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Your

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buddy, Dhruv

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Coherence and Cohesion

Work on maintaining a consistent level of detail to ensure clearer coherence throughout the letter.

Task Achievement

Pay attention to minor grammatical errors to improve the task response quality.

Task Achievement

The letter covers all the required points: explaining the reason for writing, providing details about the party, and suggesting how your friend can help.

Task Achievement

The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for the context.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter has a clear opening and closing which contributes to its structure.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
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1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

195 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in oder to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and families. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?