The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent
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The two line charts below illustrate the percentage of males and females who are aged between 60-64 who were employed in Belgium, the USA, Japan and Australia in different two years.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the men
's percentage in each country and year is over the women's percentage. While
in Belgium the female employees are roughly none.
There is a big difference between the men
's job
in Belgium, in 1970 it was 79% and after 30 years it decreased to around 60%. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
Moreover
, In the USA the number of men
employed was mostly the same. But in comparison with women's employment in the USA men
are double.
Japan was approximately the same in spite of the years, The men
employees were 85% in 1970. In addition
, in the same year
women's employment was 43%. Add a comma
year,
Whereas
the Australian men
who had a job in 1970 were 76%, and 47% in 2000. Furthermore
, it is the halving in female's
employment.Change noun form
female
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