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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of people in four Asian states who are currently living in urban areas from 1970 to 2020, with
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forseen
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foreseen
 view for 2030 and 2040. By and large, obviously, Malaysian citizens registered the highest
percent
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percentage
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 of living in cities in almost all the studied period.
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, the Indonesian population represented the lowest
percent
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per cent
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for
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1970-2000,
in addition
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 to the Thailand people who figured the smallest ratio for the years 2000-2040. In
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 of
Philippines
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the Philippines
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 and
Malaesian
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Malaysian
 public, they both started
by
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 almost 30% of the total people
were
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living in cities.
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 figure rose to about 45% in 1990. After that,
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Philippine
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Philippines
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 dropped to about 40% in 2010, before rising gradually again to nearly 50% by
the
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2040.
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, Malaysia
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 a sharp rise to 80% in 2040.
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, the same trend was seen
with
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in
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 Thailand and Indonesia.
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by
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 nearly 19% and about 15%, respectively. Gradual
increase
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increases
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 were seen for both till almost 25% by 2000. That was before Indonesia climbed to 50% by 2020, and predicted to be 60% by 2040.
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 that, Thailand
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 rose steadily to 50% in 2040.

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Vocabulary: The word "figured" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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