The diagram below shows a simple system that turns dirty water into clean water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows a simple system that turns dirty water into clean water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the process of turning dirty

water

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into filtered

water

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Overall

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, the operation of filtering the

water

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is done by a

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water-filter

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water filter

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assenbly

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assembly

and through

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apply

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basic simple steps.

Intitially

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Initially

, the dirty

water

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is poured into a special plastic barrel that

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is coverd

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coverd

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covered

storage

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a storage

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drum.

This

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blastic

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plastic

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barrel consists of three layers, the first layer and the largest one is sand, the intermediate layer is charcoal, and the final one is gravel.

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, there is a plastic lid covering

this

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tank. After a period of time, the

water

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separated from its dust and impurities, and it

accumlate

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accumulated

into the upper

serface

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surface

this

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storage drum. After that, the filtered ware is

being

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apply

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transferred into another storage drum by a tube, which is connected between

these barrel

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this barrel

these barrels

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. Ultimately, the

water

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are

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ready to drink.

zuhrakhirie1997Fri Dec 20 2024

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

135 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Diagram
Simple system
Dirty water
Clean water
Overall process
Input
Output
Comparison
Relevant
Environmental impact

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