The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The given line graph describes the income of 4

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s namely The Tea Room, Internet Express, Wifi Café, and Café Cool in New York over the

last

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year.

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, all the proportions of earnings in Wifi Café, Café Cool and Internet Express experienced an upward

trend

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while

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there was a drop in the Tea Room over the given period

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, the Tea Room's earning has a

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beginning at 160 thousand

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in January. After 2

months

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, it peaked at 20 thousand

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which is the highest point in the graph.

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, the money they earned fluctuated around 120k to 150k

dollars

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from April to October but later it saw a steep dive of 90k

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from 140k to 50k

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in the 2

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months

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.

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,

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Internet Express's earnings were more stable than the first one. It began at 100k

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and finished at 120k

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. In the first 3

months

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, it saw a quite slight fluctuation around 100k and 90k

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dollars

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.

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continued its period of stability at 80k

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dollars

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in 4

months

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from April to July but later it saw a steady upward

trend

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of 60k

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dollars

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in the

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5

months

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, there was an upward

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in the revenue of Wifi Café and Café Cool over the given period.

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former saw a slow fluctuation in the first 5

months

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of around 10k

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from 50 to 60k

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but

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it peaked at 190k

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in the

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month. In the latter, the money made by Cafe Cool saw a stable fluctuation from 30 to 60k

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in 11

months

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which led to a remarkable upward

trend

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60k of

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in the

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month of the year