The chart below contains information provided by Australia's tertiary insititutions about the percentage of male and female students who enrolled in different subjects in 1995.

The chart below contains information provided by Australia's tertiary insititutions about the percentage of male and female students who enrolled in different subjects in 1995.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian men and
women
in several fields of study in the year 1995. A glance at the figure reveals that most
females
enrolled in
arts
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and humanities section,
whereas
the majority of
males
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engineering.
According to
what is shown, roughly under 20% of
males
joined in engineering,
similarly
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to
females
who joined arts and humanities.
In contrast
, a tiny proportion of
women
studied engineering.
Furthermore
, exactly 15% of
females
enrolled in health and approximately 4% of
males
. Accounting and economics were joined by more than one out
ten
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of both genders. For education, 10
percent
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of
females
joined it and above 5% of the other gender. In terms of business studies, nearly 9% of
women
completed their studies in it,
likewise
to
males
. Around 15% and 7% of men and
women
respectively studied math and science.
Moreover
, computer science
studied
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by 10% of
males
and about 4% of
females
.
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