In some countries, school are open till late so that children can be looked after when parents are at work. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

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Institutes around the world have taken many initiatives for the protection of
children
. In
few
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countries,
schools
remain open till late to facilitate working
parents
.
This
essay will discuss the potential merits and demerits of
this
trend.
This
trend has various advantages, first and foremost, is
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child protection. The
school
authorities protect
children
from perilous situations. They remain completely safe and sound inside the
school
buildings. There are various incidents that can happen when
children
are alone at
home
such
as abduction and
home
burglary. Inside the
school
boundaries
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parents
do not have
fret
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about their child's protection. The other benefit is the increased productivity. With other
school mates
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schoolmates
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, they are able to play or study.
However
,
in
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home
, there is a good chance that they will waste their time watching TV or playing video games. The time spent in an
institue
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institute
can be fruitful, which in turn can polish sports and study skills. There are potential drawbacks
of
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keeping young ones late at
school
. They may feel exhausted, by not properly getting rest, they can get tired and by reaching
home
will not be able to do homework.
This
mental and physical exhaustion can affect their academic performance and the physical tiredness can make them sick.
Likewise
,
schools
are not
safe
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and secure as
parents
consider them. If
school
authorities have taken
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the initiatives
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initiatives
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, it does not mean that dreadful incidents are unavoidable. Most of the horrific incidents have
also
happened
with in
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within
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the
school
boundaries.
For instance
, shooting
incidentes
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incidents
and physical
harassments
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harassment
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are ubiquitous in
schools
. By completely relying on
schools
for the child's security would not be fair. In conclusion, staying late at
school
can have fruitful effects,
however
, the drawbacks can not be overlooked. In my opinion, it would be more suitable for
children
to stay with their
parents
instead
of
school's
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staff.
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