The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  (20 mins.)
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line graph illustrates the amount of
air
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pollution
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, measured in
million
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tonnes
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, generated by
three
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sources—
transportation
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,
industry
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, and residential activities—in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2005.
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, total
air
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pollution
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experienced a significant decline from seven
million
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tonnes
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in 1990 to
three
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million
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tonnes
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in 2005, with a
period
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of stability between 1999 and 2002. Among the sources,
industry
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consistently contributed the highest levels of
air
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pollution
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, followed by
transportation
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,
while
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residential activities accounted for the smallest share by the end of the
period
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. In 1990,
industry
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was the dominant source of
air
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pollution
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, producing around five
million
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tonnes
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,
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transportation
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and residential activities each contributed approximately one
million
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tonnes
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. Over the following years,
industry
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emissions
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decreased sharply, with a particularly steep drop after 1993.
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,
pollution
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from
transportation
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remained relatively stable at about one
million
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tonnes
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throughout the entire
period
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.
Emissions
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from residential activities showed a gradual decline, dropping steadily from 1990 onwards. By 2005, these
emissions
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had almost reached zero, marking the most significant reduction among the
three
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sources. Despite the substantial decrease in industrial
emissions
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,
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sector remained the largest contributor to
air
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pollution
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in 2005. In summary,
while
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all
three
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sectors saw reductions in
air
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pollution
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over the 15-year
period
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, the decline was most pronounced in the residential sector,
whereas
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transportation
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showed minimal change.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollution, million, tonnes, three, industry, period, transportation, emissions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollutants
  • emissions
  • decrease
  • increase
  • stable
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • drop
  • significant
  • legislation
  • technological advancements
  • comparative analysis
  • contributors
  • households
  • transport
  • industry
  • regulation
  • pattern
  • anomaly
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