Task 1: The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on five types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the total distance travelled by UK residents on

sevaral

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several

types of transport in 1990 and 2000.

Overall

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, it is obvious that

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apply

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the bar chart of people

had

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who had

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used

bicycle

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bicycles

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motorbike

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motorbikes

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and air

vehicals

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vehicles

presented a

minotary

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notary

minatory

of the total data

while

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constrast

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contrast

bus

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buses

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and

train

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trains

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made up the majority over the period. The year 2000 witnessed a slight decline

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the

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number of kilometers

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kilometers

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kilometres

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that people

usted

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used

bicycle

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bicycles

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travelled

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travel

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from 8

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billions

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billion

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to 75.

Motorbike

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Motorbikes

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saw the same trend when the

kilometer

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kilometre

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that

motorcycle

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motorcycles

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used

was decrease

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was decreased

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0.5

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by 0.5

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billions

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billion

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kilometers

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kilometres

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The air

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Air

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transportation increased

steady

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between 6

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billions

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billion

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to 8

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billions

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billion

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Bus

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The bus

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was the

vehical

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vehicle

that residents used most because it took the highest data over the total distance, 43

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billions

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billion

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in 1990 and

reach

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reached

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billions

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billion

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in 2000. Rail transportation was the second highest

while

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in 1990, the

kilometer

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kilometre

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that people used on these

vehicals

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vehicles

was 40

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billions

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billion

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and growth to 45

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billions

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billion

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in 2000. Both types of transport in 1990

reach

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reached

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107

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and recorded a soar to 115

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in the first year of

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the 21st

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century.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words billions, km with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
39
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

185 words

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