The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of
energy
consumption in an average Australian household and the corresponding greenhouse gas Use synonyms
emissions
. The data is categorized into six areas: heating, Use synonyms
water
heating, refrigeration, lighting, cooling, and other appliances.
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Overall
, heating is the largest consumer of Linking Words
energy
, Use synonyms
while
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water
heating is the main contributor to greenhouse gas Use synonyms
emissions
. Some categories, Use synonyms
such
as cooling, have minimal impact on both Linking Words
energy
use and Use synonyms
emissions
, Use synonyms
whereas
others, like Linking Words
water
heating, have a disproportionately high environmental effect.
Heating accounts for 42% of Use synonyms
energy
use, making it the most significant category, followed by Use synonyms
water
heating at 30%. Other appliances consume 15%, Use synonyms
while
refrigeration, lighting, and cooling contribute smaller shares at 7%, 4%, and 2%, respectively.
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In contrast
, Linking Words
water
heating produces the largest share of greenhouse gas Use synonyms
emissions
at 32%, despite using less Use synonyms
energy
than heating. Other appliances are the second-largest emitter at 28%, Use synonyms
while
heating contributes 15%. Refrigeration and lighting generate 14% and 8%, respectively, with cooling having the smallest impact at 3%.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, emissions, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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