The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate how Australians use
energy
and the amount of Use synonyms
greenhouse
gases they emit Use synonyms
as a result
. Linking Words
Overall
, there are 6 groups of Linking Words
energy
utilization in Australia.
To start with, almost Use synonyms
the
half of Correct article usage
apply
energy
is needed for heating, and, Use synonyms
additionally
, the third is made up of water heating. Other household activities represent much less Linking Words
energy
. Use synonyms
For example
, other appliances contribute to 15% of Linking Words
overall
Linking Words
energy
consumption, which is only half of the water heating part. The Use synonyms
least
proportions are refrigeration, lighting, and cooling, with 7%, 4% and 2% respectively.
As for the second chart, it can be seen that Correct word choice
lowest
the
water heating contributes to Correct article usage
apply
greenhouse
gas emissions mostly, and the percentage is just above 30. Interestingly, Use synonyms
but
the second place is taken by other appliances, with 28%, Correct word choice
apply
while
Australians consume only 15% of Linking Words
overall
Linking Words
energy
on them. Heating and refrigeration make up almost the same proportions, at around 15% each. Logically, lighting and cooling emit Use synonyms
the
insufficient amounts of Correct article usage
apply
greenhouse
gases, only 8% and 3%, respectively, as not so much Use synonyms
energy
in the households spent on them.
In conclusion, I would like to emphasize the fact that there is a tendency Use synonyms
of
higher Change preposition
for
greenhouse
Use synonyms
gases
emissions from Change the noun form
gas
the
appliances with Correct article usage
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the
high Correct article usage
apply
energy
consumption.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, greenhouse with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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