The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Wite the essay in 150 words.
The map depicts the changes that have occurred in Stokeford
City
in 1930 and the present. Overall
, the city
has been modernized with changes including upgraded infrastructure and buildings, removal of farms, and additional houses
has been built.
In the past, there were five primary buildings placed in the city
. A large house complex surrounded by gardens was situated in the middle. Then
, on top of this
accommodation, there was a Primary school
. Moreover
, across the school
, were two
shops and a post office. Furthermore
, houses
were located around the school
, shops, and post office area. In addition
, a bridge was placed at the top north of the city
and there were two
cow farms, the first one was located near the bridge, and the other was in the south.
Currently, the two
farms and shops have been demolished and replaced with new houses
and streets. Meanwhile, large houses
with gardens in the middle are now transformed into big retirement houses
. Additionally
, the primary school
has been upgraded with two
new buildings. On the other hand
, the bridge and the post office remained the same.Submitted by bilqissasha on
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