The chart below shows the number of people employed in five types of work on one region of Australia in 2001 and 2008, Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where refevant.

The chart below shows the number of people employed in five types of work on one

region of Australia in 2001 and 2008,

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparison where refevant.
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The given bar chart compares data about how many people worked in 5 various sections namely, sales, accounting, computing, nursing, and farming in one area of Australia at 2 points in time
that is
2001 and 2008.
Overall
, it was important that the trends of all of them other than accounting and farming increased over the period of 7 years.
According to
the diagram, at the start, sales, the most important section that had a lot of employees, hit just under 160.000 in 20001;
then
it rose slightly to roughly 165,000 in 2008.
while
accounting reduced marginally from 60,000 in 2001 to nearly 50,000. The graph demonstrates that computing and nursing reached the same figure in the beginning at roughly 50000;
thereafter
, they leapt to 80,000 for computing and approximately 60,000 for nursing in 2008.
In contrast
, farming scored almost 30,000 in 2001 after that, it declined to just under 20,000 in 2008.
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