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The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, adn make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, adn make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the percentages of Canadians' favourite takeaways, and the bar graph represents the number of
Indian
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 hotels in
Canada
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 from 1960 to 2015.
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, the Chinese and
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 are the most popular takeaway food in
Canada
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 among around nine other takeaway food categories.
According to
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 the bar graph, the figure for
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 restaurants in
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 represented a steadily increasing trend across the period. The favourite takeaways in
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,
such
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 as Chinese,
Indian
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, Italian, and Persian, are among eight to nine takeaway foods. In
this
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 category, the Chinese account for the highest percentage at 34%, and the second highest is
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 food, which accounts for slightly over a quarter of the total percentage.
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, Italian and Persian foods account for 10% and 9%, respectively. The remaining takeaways categories fall in the range of one to four per cent,
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, Mexican, Japanese, Greek, Thai, and others, except neverorder, which represents 11%. The number of
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 restaurants in
Canada
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 increased and continued to grow until 2015. From 1960 to 1997, the number of restaurants in
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 increased from five hundred to seven thousand and five hundred,
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 after that, it still grew and reached approximately nine thousand in the end.
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