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Chart and table provide allocation of men and women for the household activities, apart from paid work, in 2008 in the UK.

Chart and table provide allocation of men and women for the household activities, apart from paid work, in 2008 in the UK.
The Chart and table give information about the home and leisure activities of males and females out of paid jobs, in minutes,in one year in the United Kingdom.
Overall
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although
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 media programs took the largest time among free time activities, sports exercises showed the lowest numbers. In household work,
women
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 spent more than
men
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. The highest rate of TV, video and radio was experienced in
men
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 at more than 2 hours , which was the most popular leisure occupation,
while
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 in
women
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 the proportion was a bit lower than 2 hours.
In contrast
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, sport was the least common among other activities at 15 in
men
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 and 11 in
women
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. Regarding reading, in
women
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 and
men
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, there was a little gap at 18 and 19 respectively. Cooking and washing revealed major numbers in
women
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 at nearly 80 ,
whereas
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men
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 did them only for half an hour. Shopping was close in numbers in both genders at 30 in
men
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 and 37 in
women
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.Not surprisingly, laundry work was done by girls at 30 than boys at 10 . In repair,
men
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 used approximately 20 and
women
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 10.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men with synonyms.
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