Chart and table provide allocation of men and women for the household activities, apart from paid work, in 2008 in the UK.

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The chart and table compare leisure

activities

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and household

activities

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between

men

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and

women

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in 2008 in the UK.

Overall

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it is clear that

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apply

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men

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spend more

time

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on leisure

activities

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than

women

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whereas

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women

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spent

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spend

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time

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on household

activities

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. As the table shows,

men

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spent more of their

time

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on TV, video, and radio rather than

women

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, 137

minutes

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and 118

minutes

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, respectively.

Men

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read a bit less than

women

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, 18

minutes

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and 19

minutes

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Men

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had more interest in sport and spent more

time

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on sport than

women

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, 15

minutes

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and 11

minutes

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, respectively, in 2008 in the UK. As the chart shows, cooking and washing always did

women

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and spent more

time

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than

men

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, 68

minutes

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and 25

minutes

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. For shopping

women

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spent more

time

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rather than

men

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, 30

minutes

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and 25

minutes

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. For repairing

men

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spent twice more than

women

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, 18

minutes

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and 9

minutes

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, respectively, but for washing and clothing,

women

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spent three times more than

men

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, 24

minutes

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and 8

minutes

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, men, women, time, minutes with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

168 words

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Chart and table provide allocation of men and women for the household activities, apart from paid work, in 2008 in the UK.

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweight the disadvantages?

In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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