The table below shows the changes in some household types in Canada from 1984 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below illustrates the updates in 5 different types of households between 1984 and 2020 in Canada.

Overall

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, the highest result demonstrated dependent

children

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household

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households

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at the end

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this

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period.

But

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However

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, the

least

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lowest

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result showed non-dependent

children

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. In 1984 ,non-dependent

children

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household

Fix the agreement mistake

households

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was

Verb problem

had

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one of the lowest

percentage

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percentages

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with 10 % ,

due to

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over the years it

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apply

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decreased , so that didn't become the highest percentage .

While

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, the highest result demonstrated dependent

children

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family at the beginning was 54 , over these years it

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has

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declined .By 2020 it

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has

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became

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become

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36 , but it is still the highest number of

residence

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residents

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On the other hand

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, in 1984 lone parent was the lowest with 4 % and

at the end

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this

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period became 12 , which is higher with only 3% than non-dependent families.

Furthermore

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, no

children

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households

illustrateted

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illustrated

average

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the average

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percentage , it was in 1984 19 and by 2020 25% .

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words children with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

162 words

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