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as a result
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person
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group
of people believe that Change the wording
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parents
should decide what Use synonyms
suitable
for their Add a missing verb
is suitable
children
.
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children
should obey their Use synonyms
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parents
wishes, because Change noun form
parent's
parents'
parents
are more intelligent and more Use synonyms
experience
than Replace the word
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children
and many kids can'Use synonyms
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make decisions by themselves. Use synonyms
children
who aren'Use synonyms
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matured
or experienced enough to make Replace the word
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decision
by their own intelligence for that particular reason, Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
parents
always decide what to do or not. Use synonyms
For example
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affected by smartphones, play virtual games and stay inside of the home and don'Use synonyms
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go outside of the house for actual physical play. Use synonyms
As a result
, those Linking Words
children
are facing both physical and mental illness for that reason, Use synonyms
parents
guided those Use synonyms
children
to avoid excessive screen time.
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On the other hand
, permitting them to make their own choices, in my opinion, can have many advantages Linking Words
such
as being more creative. Linking Words
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could lead them to faster mental developmentLinking Words
,
because they face a problem and solve that by themselves. By doing Remove the comma
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this
kind of activity they could be much more intelligent than other Linking Words
children
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due to
experiences they are gaining over time. Linking Words
For instance
, a school named "Progressive Model School", where students who make decisions by their own thinking Linking Words
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study
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actually decide anything by themselves.
In conclusion, people who believe that it is a smart choice to Use synonyms
decide
their Verb problem
give
children
whatever they want, because that will lead them to become Use synonyms
a
wise Correct article usage
apply
person
. Fix the agreement mistake
people
However
, individuals who are afraid of their Linking Words
kids
mental growth and ability to their Change to a genitive case
kid's
kids'
decision making
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decision-making
they
are more likely to control their Correct pronoun usage
apply
children
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,
because the outcome could be dangerous if they Remove the comma
apply
don'
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aren't
t
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lead
by their Wrong verb form
led
parents
.Use synonyms
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