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Coherence and Cohesion
Your essay could benefit from a clear structure. Aim for a strong introduction, several body paragraphs, and a concise conclusion. Each paragraph should have a clear main idea and supporting details.
Task Response
Ensure all your main points are supported with concrete details or examples. You can illustrate your points by comparing the past and present modes of communication.
Task Response
Avoid conversational tones and aim for an academic style. Instead of writing 'to sum up,' you could opt for 'in conclusion.'
Task Achievement
You have outlined several advantages of modern communication technologies like speed and accessibility.
Task Achievement
You discussed potential drawbacks such as reduced personal interactions, which adds depth to your essay.
Fully explain your ideas
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- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
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