You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

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Dear Ms Patel, I am writing

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letter regarding the advertisement you posted online on Facebook for having a Hindi tutor for your two children. My name is Dhruv, I am a Hindi teacher

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and

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I have experience

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apply

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teaching for more than five years in a primary school

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my hometown. I have taught more than five hundred

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students

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this

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career.

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, I know the basic strategies for teaching in

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manner and that will help

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child to learn fast.

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, I can

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help them

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with

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their school homework and projects

for getting

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the

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better grades.

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, I can help you to do some household work

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your task easy. As I

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moved to Australia

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months ago so I do not have any job right now.

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, if I get

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job it will be

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help for me to

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my basic needs. I look forward to your response at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Dhruv

Submitted by dhruvp1166 on Mon Dec 23 2024

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coherence cohesion

Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. This enhances readability and clarity for the reader.

task achievement

Consider adding more details about your teaching strategies to further demonstrate your suitability for the job.

coherence cohesion

The letter is well-structured with a clear greeting and closing.

task achievement

You've addressed all parts of the task effectively and maintained an appropriate tone throughout the letter.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

TESOL certification
Experience in teaching children
Knowledge of Australian culture
Passion for language education
Flexible and adaptable
Design customized lesson plans
Patient and understanding
Strong communication skills
Interpersonal skills
Participate in family activities
Enthusiasm for cultural exchange

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