The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The graphs illustrate the total number of hours of housework each
week
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per household between 1920 and 2019,
also
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, in the same
period
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the
percentage
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of electrical dispositives
such
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as washing machines, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners. Over the
period
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from 1920 to 2019, there was a decrease in housework per
week
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, reaching its minimum value by 2019.
On the other hand
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, there is a growth tendency in the
percentage
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of households from 1920 to 2019, and by 2000 vacuum cleaners and refrigerators reached 100 per cent of households. By 1920, the number of hours of housework per
week
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had the highest value with 50 hours per
week
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with a meaningful decrease between 1920 to 1960, and a slight decrease by the end of 2019.
On the contrary
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, the tendency of households with electrical uses increased over time,
for instance
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, from 1920 to 1960 there was a sharp increase in the
percentage
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of refrigeration, but, in the case of washing machines increased slightly in the same
period
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of time, because of that, in the
last
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period
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, the
percentage
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of vacuum cleaner and refrigerator outnumbered washing machine by a margin above 20 per cent
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words week, period, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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