The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the transportation access to
a
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urban hospital between 2007 and 2010.
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, there weren’t many facilities in 2007 but in 2010 it can be seen that the urban hospital was surrounded by a variety of facilities. In 2007, there was a ring
road
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that covered the whole hospital and a few minor changes happened in 2010, like there was a public car parking area added on the east side of
ring
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the ring
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road
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and a small roundabout situated just in front of the hospital,
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, in 2010 it was used to be hospital
road
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which was connected to the city
road
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.
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, another ring
road
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found
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in 2010 which was located far distance
on
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the south and connected with the city
road
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.
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, among those roundabouts, there was still car parking available for staff and opposite of it bus station can be seen there as well but in 2007 it was empty space back
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • road access
  • city hospital
  • traffic flow
  • public transport facilities
  • intersection
  • roundabout
  • car park
  • dedicated
  • modifications
  • congestion
  • accessibility
  • hospital entrance
  • parking areas
  • main features
  • signage
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