The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The maps illustrate the transportation access to
a
urban hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Change the article
an
Overall
, there weren’t many facilities in 2007 but in 2010 it can be seen that the urban hospital was surrounded by a variety of facilities.
In 2007, there was a ring Linking Words
road
that covered the whole hospital and a few minor changes happened in 2010, like there was a public car parking area added on the east side of Use synonyms
ring
Add an article
the ring
road
and a small roundabout situated just in front of the hospital, Use synonyms
however
, in 2010 it was used to be hospital Linking Words
road
which was connected to the city Use synonyms
road
.
Use synonyms
Additionally
, another ring Linking Words
road
Use synonyms
found
in 2010 which was located far distance Wrong verb form
was founded
on
the south and connected with the city Change preposition
to
road
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, among those roundabouts, there was still car parking available for staff and opposite of it bus station can be seen there as well but in 2007 it was empty space back Linking Words
then
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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