The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2020.
The table compares the information about customer purchases
on
different Change preposition
of
good
in five individual Fix the agreement mistake
goods
countries
in 2020.
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Overall
,the category of consumer goods that all Linking Words
countries
spent most was food, drinks, and tobacco Use synonyms
while
the least consuming category was leisure and education in all five Linking Words
countries
.
Turkey Use synonyms
show
the highest figures Change the verb form
shows
Linking Words
then
other Replace the word
than
countries
.
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First,
Turkey Linking Words
spend
most at 32,12% on food, drinks and tobacco. The expense of Ireland was Change the verb form
spends
also
higher Linking Words
values
28,91% Replace the word
valuing
compered
with Sweden Correct your spelling
compared
that
spent just under 16%.
Spain and Italy spent 18,80% and 16,36% respectively. Correct pronoun usage
which
On the other hand
, the least expenditure was leisure and education industry, Turkey has the highest spending Linking Words
of
nearly similar Change preposition
apply
with
Sweden 4,35%. Italy, Ireland and Spain with 3,20%, 2,21% and 1,98% respectively.
The clothing mostly applied to consumers in Italy smooth 9,00%, Change preposition
to
whereas
in Sweden Linking Words
Correct pronoun usage
there was
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
less
purchases just under 6% than other four Change the quantifier
fewer
countries
.Use synonyms
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