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are
people
 under and above 30 years. In general, Achievement at work was the highest number for all Use synonyms
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second biggest cycle was doing hobbies for both age groups.
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To begin
 with, around 30% of Linking Words
people
 under 30 feel happy when they achieve their Use synonyms
works
. The second thing that Fix the agreement mistake
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make
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made
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accounting
of
 22 per cent. Change preposition
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 when they Wrong verb form
relaxed
having
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youth
 feel refreshment when they travel outside. Correct article usage
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Lastly
, the number of other factors was the smallest among other categories by nearly 14%.
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On the other hand
, 32% of Linking Words
people
 who are above 30 years old feel satisfied when they done their work. Less than 25% of those Use synonyms
people
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doing
 their hobbies. Financial security was the third biggest figure for old Change the form of the verb
do
people
 by exactly 20%. Use synonyms
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be
of
 just 10 percent.Change preposition
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