The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarise the informantion by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates the quantities of
tea
and Use synonyms
coffee
, measured in Use synonyms
tonnes
, imported by four distinct countries. Use synonyms
Overall
, the UK, which demonstrates a strong preference for Linking Words
tea
, Use synonyms
imports
far more Use synonyms
tea
than Use synonyms
coffee
, Use synonyms
whereas
the US and Canada exhibit the opposite trend by importing more Linking Words
coffee
than Use synonyms
tea
. Germany, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, shows a balanced pattern, as its Linking Words
imports
of Use synonyms
tea
and Use synonyms
coffee
are similar, Use synonyms
although
Linking Words
tea
slightly exceeds Use synonyms
coffee
.
In terms of Use synonyms
tea
, the UK leads significantly, importing approximately 80,000 Use synonyms
tonnes
, which is the highest among the four countries. Use synonyms
Following
Linking Words
this
, Germany Linking Words
imports
around 50,000 Use synonyms
tonnes
, Use synonyms
while
Canada and the US, which import much smaller quantities, each bring in less than 20,000 Linking Words
tonnes
.
For Use synonyms
coffee
, Germany leads with slightly more than 30,000 Use synonyms
tonnes
, Use synonyms
while
the US and Canada both import higher amounts of Linking Words
coffee
, roughly 40,000 Use synonyms
tonnes
each. Use synonyms
However
, despite being the leader in Linking Words
tea
Use synonyms
imports
, the UK Use synonyms
imports
comparatively low quantities of Use synonyms
coffee
, with less than 20,000 Use synonyms
tonnes
, highlighting its preference for Use synonyms
tea
over Use synonyms
coffee
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, tonnes, imports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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