The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast foof restaurants between 2003 and 2013

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast foof restaurants between 2003 and 2013
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The given chart illustrates the frequency of people eating fast food at restaurants in the USA in three periods
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2003, 2006, and 2013.
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, the number of people who consume fast food every day was generally the lowest compared to other times throughout the years,
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once
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week
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group held the biggest numbers collectively, except in 2013. In 2003, the proportions were the highest for customers who never ate fast food or even every day, which only had a subtle difference between those groups.
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, in 2006 and 2003, they were in the same percentages, which were smaller barely climbed to 5%.
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, the total of individuals who came to restaurants a few times a year in 2003 was marginally above 10%, which was relatively lower than in 2006 and 2013. The percentages of customers who went occasionally for once a
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and once or twice a month
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were higher in all years. In 2006, it was slightly more than 30% for people who came once a
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in 2013 it was once or twice in month.
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, the numbers continuously placed the middle position in 2003 with 30%, but unnoticeably greater in once a
week
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category.
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