IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

The chart provides information about the imported coffee and tea throw different four countries.

The chart provides information about the imported coffee and tea throw different four countries.
#information #coffee #tea #four #countries
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The bar chart provides information about the
amount
Use synonyms
 of
coffee
Use synonyms
 and
tea
Use synonyms
 introduced
inside
Change preposition
in
show examples
 four various countries Canada,
US
Correct article usage
the US
show examples
,
Use synonyms
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
show examples
, and Germany from the other regions.The units are measured in
tonnes
Use synonyms
.
Overall
Linking Words
,
it is clear that
Linking Words
 the
amount
Use synonyms
 of
tea
Use synonyms
comes
Correct pronoun usage
that comes
show examples
 in the
UK
Use synonyms
 is the highest.
Also
Linking Words
, In all Countries except
Use synonyms
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
show examples
, the quantity of
coffee
Use synonyms
 is more than
tea
Use synonyms
 in the three regions.
To begin
Linking Words
 with
US
Correct article usage
the US
show examples
, the total
amount
Use synonyms
 of
coffee
Use synonyms
 is about 40000
tonnes
Use synonyms
 as opposed to
tea
Use synonyms
 is nearly 20000
tonnes
Use synonyms
.
Smiliraly
Correct your spelling
Similarly
, in Germany, the quota of
coffee
Use synonyms
 is high compared to
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
tea
Use synonyms
 where the
precentage
Correct your spelling
percentage
percentages
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
 50000 and over just
over40000
Correct your spelling
over 40000
tonnes
Use synonyms
 respectively.
By contrast
Linking Words
, the imported
coffee
Use synonyms
 from
forign
Correct your spelling
foreign
country
Fix the agreement mistake
countries
show examples
 to the
UK
Use synonyms
 is
greatest
Correct article usage
the greatest
show examples
 and it
reach
Change the verb form
reaches
show examples
 80000
tonnes
Use synonyms
, but the
Coffee
Use synonyms
 is
lowest
Change the article
the lowest
show examples
sand
Correct your spelling
and
show examples
 it is just 30000
tonnes
Use synonyms
. One notable
points
Change to a singular noun
point
show examples
 is that in
Canad
Correct your spelling
Canada
show examples
, it
consist
Change the verb form
consists
show examples
 a considerable difference between the
amount
Use synonyms
 of imported
coffee
Use synonyms
 and
tea
Use synonyms
 where the figures are below 10000 and 20000 respectively.
Submitted by useroman99 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, coffee, tea, uk, tonnes with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "provides" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: