The table below shows the figures for impriosonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. write a report for university ,lecturer describing the information shown below. you should wirte at least 150 words

The table below shows the figures for impriosonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. write a report for university ,lecturer describing the information shown below. you should wirte at least 150 words
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of prisoners in Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, the United States and Canada from the year 1930 to 1980.
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, it can be seen that the first 30
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rates of prisoners had increased throughout the
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.
On the other hand
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, the next 30
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were fluctuating. In detail, in the year 1930 the number of prisoners had increased to 100 which kept New Zealand and the US stable as it continued rising to 120;
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, in 1940 had experienced a noticeable increase to almost half
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dramatically increased to approximately 120, the same happened in 1950. Moving on to the year 1960 which had slightly risen to almost 63 it later on climbed rapidly to approximately 120
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slightly fell to 100.
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, in 1970 it remained ceaselessly in the first few
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as it
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went up to almost 90
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fell to approximately 82,
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, rates oscillated at the beginning of 1980
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had a considerable increase to 140
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decreased to almost the middle of 80 and 100.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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