In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? And how can people research this?

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In many parts of the
world
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more individuals are becoming more interested in their
homes
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histories, enhanced by the desire to be connected to
history
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. They can use many modern technological methods to research it. Most
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the
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people always seek to be a part of
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history
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, and one of the
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to reach
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is to live in ancient or old
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. It can provide an emotional connection between the place and the owner.
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, the historical value of
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this
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houses has the ability to
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the
person
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satisfaction and happiness.
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, it had the capability to increase the self-esteem by
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in a portion of the
history
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.
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, many people in KSA
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to hire specialists to examine their houses and decide when it was built
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they published those results
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social media. The best way to examine the houses by giving adequate and correct information about
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history
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is
laboratories
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through laboratories
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. Because they had a collection of new modern precious machines, Based on X-RAY and immunofluorescence
technique
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,
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this
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tow
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mechanism has the ability to give
general
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a general
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and detailed view
to
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the
building
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building's
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history
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with a low error rate. To institute,
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machines
was
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used to examine the old ancient
building
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buildings
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in the world
such
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as Pyramids and it
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can benefit in the building examination.
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, the person’s motive to research
about
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his house
history
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is to be related to something spiritual,
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and inspire
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his feeling to be in a place
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that exceed
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the present.
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best mechanism
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Lab machines based on scientific methods.
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Task Achievement
Try to provide more specific examples to support your points, rather than general statements. This will enhance the task response.
Task Achievement
Ensure clarity in expressing ideas. Elaborate more on points for a comprehensive understanding, such as how exactly people feel connected to history through their homes.
Coherence and Cohesion
Pay attention to grammatical errors and typos to make the essay more polished and structured. For instance, 'This machines' should be 'These machines'.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider giving a clearer structure to the essay by starting each paragraph with a topic sentence that outlines the main point.
Task Achievement
The essay addresses the reasons people are interested in their home's history, which is aligned with the task response requirement.
Coherence and Cohesion
Introduction and conclusion are present and logically aligned with the essay's main topic.
Coherence and Cohesion
Utilizes modern technology's role in historical research as a strong point, indicating relevance to the present day.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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