Writing Task 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, •explain why you changed jobs •describe your new job •tell him / her your other news
Hello MR Osama , I hope you are doing well . I recently got a new
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job
finally
,Linking Words
I
would like to share it with you .
In the beginning , I am interested Correct word choice
and I
to get
different experiences , Because , my ambition is CEO ,Change preposition
in getting
Therefore
I should work in Accountant , Finance and Linking Words
another department
. My Fix the agreement mistake
other departments
last
job was accountant ,Linking Words
However
, Now I Linking Words
got
an opportunity in the finance department . My job is Financial Analyst , I am looking for chances to invest . I remember you Verb problem
have
also
working in finance ,But , I forgot which company .The Linking Words
last
news I have got Linking Words
it
is I have Correct pronoun usage
apply
been
known my girlfriend for six years Unnecessary verb
apply
also
now Linking Words
finally
we are going to get married Linking Words
in
next month , Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, You have to come to my wedding , I will not be able to accept any Linking Words
apologise
.
Thank you , I am looking forward to hearing back from you .
Best regard
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apologies
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coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas more clearly into separate paragraphs to improve readability. For example, dedicate one paragraph to your job change, another to describing your new job, and another to your personal news.
coherence cohesion
Try to use linking words like 'also', 'but', 'however', 'therefore' more purposefully to improve the logical flow of your letter.
task achievement
You have successfully covered all parts of the task by explaining your reason for changing jobs, describing your new job role, and sharing personal news.
task achievement
The tone of your letter remains friendly and informal, which is appropriate for writing to a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,