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The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table summarizes information about the three most populated countries in the world and compares the density, land area and urban
population
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 of each country.
Overall
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,
China
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 has the largest
population
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.
While
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India
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 is the most dense country among them with the lowest land area.
However
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,
although
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 the
USA
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 has the least
population
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 , its urban
population
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 supersedes others. In detail,
China
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 is the most populated country among these three with more than 1.4 billion individuals. In second place is
India
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 with roughly 1.35 billion.
On the other hand
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,
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USA's
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 number is about one-fifth of
China
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's with 327 million. Since 2017,
India
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 has had the highest rise with 1.1
percent
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per cent
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 in its
population
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.
Meanwhile
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 the other two rose less than 1 percent .
China
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also
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 has the largest territory with approximately 9.4 million kilometres. Interestingly, the
USA
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 with the lowest
population
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 owns almost the same area as
China
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 with 9.2 million kilometres.
As a result
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 , the
USA
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 has the lowest density and
India
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 is the most crowded regarding density by 36 and 455 respectively. In regard to the urban
population
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 , the
USA
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 has the most citizens
whereas
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 people in
India
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 live mostly in rural areas.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, china, india, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population growth
  • age distribution
  • urbanization
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • healthcare accessibility
  • literacy rate
  • educational attainment
  • demographic trends
  • comparative analysis
  • socio-economic factors
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