The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of weekly
income
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spent by families
on
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various categories in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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,
food
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accounted for the largest share of family expenditures in 1968,
whereas
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in 2018, leisure became the dominant category. Spending on housing and transport increased significantly over the years,
while
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the share of
income
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spent on
food
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and fuel decreased dramatically. As for 1968,
food
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was the leading category, making up approximately 35% of weekly spending, far exceeding other categories
such
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as housing and clothing, which accounted for nearly 10% each. Fuel and power,
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personal
goods
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, household
goods
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, and leisure, all had relatively similar shares, ranging from about 5% to 8%. Transport expenses were the lowest, accounting for less than 5% of weekly
income
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.
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2018, leisure replaced
food
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as the most significant expenditure, standing at nearly 23%. Housing ranked second at 19%,
while
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transport spending saw a notable rise to approximately 15%.
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, the proportion of
income
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spent on
food
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dropped sharply to around 17%. Expenditure on fuel and power declined to under 5%, similar to clothing, personal
goods
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, and household
goods
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, which all saw relatively minor shares in comparison to 1968.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, food, goods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Weekly income
  • Expenditure
  • Consumption patterns
  • Cost of living
  • Discretionary spending
  • Inflation
  • Economic indicators
  • Demographics
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Technology advancements
  • Government policies
  • Consumerism
  • Lifestyle changes
  • Fiscal habits
  • Budget allocation
  • Financial priorities
  • Societal trends
  • Purchasing power
  • Income distribution
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