The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs
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the data about
class
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sizes in primary
school
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across all four domains in
Australia
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in 2010. From an
overall
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look, it is manifested that
classes
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having 21-25
students
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were predominant in almost every
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reported, except for South
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,
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the opposite was true for
classes
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with 30
students
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or more. Delving into
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deteail
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detail
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, it is evident that in New South Wales,
classes
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with 21-25 learners constituted the largest, with 37%, followed by that with 26-30 people and 20 people or fewer at about 33% and 26% respectively. In the least figure lay
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with 30 individuals or more. Meanwhile, in South
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, the
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of
classes
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comprising under 31
person
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ranging
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from 28% to 36%, with
classes
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having a maximum of 20
students
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being the most popular. Notably, the figures for the biggest
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size
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in both states were the same, each standing at 4%. Concerning
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Australia
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Capital Territory,
classes
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consisting of 21-25 pupils constituted the majority, at just over half of all the
class
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sizes listed, compared to 38% of
classes
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having no more than 20
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.
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was in stark contrast to
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with
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capacity of 26-30 learners, making up one-tenth of the total, ten times higher than the smallest
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size
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. In Western
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, the main
class
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size
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was again 21-25 pupils, occupying 42%,
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a negligible difference was observed in the proportion of
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under 20 and 26-30 individuals with figures of 26% and 27%, in that order. In the
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position was the largest
class
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size
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, as its share was only 5%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words class, australia, classes, students, size with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • primary school
  • class size
  • proportion
  • average
  • trends
  • small/medium/large classes
  • implications
  • quality of education
  • teacher workload
  • comparison
  • variance
  • state-by-state analysis
  • education policy
  • statistical representation
  • pie chart interpretation
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