Write a letter to translation agency about the report to be translated urgently. In your letter, you should: •explain the content of letter - The letter is technical review of Windshield design of new car, Due to the recent issue of unpleasant sound in car cockpit, as the sealing of the glass is not adequate •why you need translated report - most engineers are french and preferred technical document in french •why do you need it urgently. -and need to resolve issue as the car is in production and any delay in resolving this issue could cost company a fortune.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope that you are doing well. The purpose of
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an urgent translation service for a technical report that needs to be translated
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the French language and
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needs to be submitted before
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of the day tomorrow. First and foremost, the document is a full technical summary of
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front windshield of the Tesla Model 3.
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about an unpleasant sound in the cockpit of the car,
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inadequate sealing of the glass to the
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frame. As most of our engineers in
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manufacturing plant speak
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french
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language, they prefer
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crucial document to be translated
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the
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French. Not only
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will be easy for them but will
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save a lot of our time to translate everything
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ourselves
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, it is of paramount importance that the report gets submitted to them as soon as possible.
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delay could
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company
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a fortune to re-work
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all the current production
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. Sorry for
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a short notice. Thank you for your service in advance. Sincerely, Ruchin Patel
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Logical structure
Work on improving the logical flow between sentences and paragraphs to enhance clarity.
Single idea per paragraph
Consider structuring the letter with clear, separate paragraphs for each point.
Task response
The letter successfully addresses all points required by the task and employs a suitable, professional tone throughout.
Greeting and closing
Has clear greeting and closing, contributing to good letter structure.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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