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You recently went on a business trip to another country and you faced an issue at the airport. - inconvenience Write a letter to the airport management and include ● what the details of your flight were. - AL187 to the Delhi International Airport on 28 Jan at 10:27 AM ● what the problem at the airport was. - The security check in machine was down due to lack of sufficient repair. Caused an almost half mile long waiting line in the airport and had to rushed to the gate one it was completed ● some suggestions for improvement. - Add an additional line + use software to track maintenancevand always to PM

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope that you are doing well. The purpose of
this
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 letter is to inform
about
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you about
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 a minor inconvenience that was faced by me during my
last
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 trip from the airport. First and foremost, I was flying from the YYZ to the Delhi International Airport on the AI 187 flight on the 28th of January.
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, the flight was scheduled to depart at 10:27 AM.
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, when I got the boarding pass I headed towards the security
checking
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. But as soon as I
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entered
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in
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the area, I noticed
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an almost
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 half a
mile long
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 waiting line.
And upon
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Upon
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 asking the staff, I discovered that there is only one security checking machine and that was
also
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 down
due to
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 lack of proper repair. Which caused me to
rushed
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 to my gate after it was completed.
Therefore
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, I would like to suggest that the
Airpore
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Airport
 Authority should add an additional line of security checking,
as well as
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 use
a
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software that tracks the maintenance.
In addition
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, the authority should always plan for
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 maintenance ahead of
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time. I hope that you
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 my concern and will take all the necessary steps to resolve the issue. Sincerely, Ruchin Patel

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single idea per paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph clearly focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity and understandability for the reader.
complete response
Try to provide more specific suggestions to improve the service at the airport, giving clear steps they could implement.
logical structure
Maintain consistency in the logical flow of ideas, making transitions between points clearer.
suitable writing tone
The letter has a polite and formal tone suitable for a complaint addressing an authority.
greeting and closing
The opening and closing of the letter are appropriately structured, maintaining formal writing conventions.
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