The chart below shows the percentage of people in the UK who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day between 2001 and 2008

The chart below shows the percentage of people in the UK who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day between 2001 and 2008
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The chart illustrates the proportion of people in the UK who consumed five servings of fruits and vegetables daily from 2001 to 2008.
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women
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consistently consumed the highest percentage of five portions of fruit and vegetables daily compared to
men
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and
children
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over the period. Meanwhile,
children
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had the lowest percentages throughout,
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all groups
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an increaseş In 2001,
women
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had the highest proportion at roughly 25%,
while
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men
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followed at around 17%, and
children
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consumed the least, with just over 10%. Over the next few years, there was a steady rise in these percentages, with
women
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remaining the highest consumers. By 2005,
women
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’s consumption increased to about 30%,
while
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men
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’s rose to nearly 22%, and
children
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’s consumption climbed to approximately 15%. From 2005 to 2007, the percentage of people eating five portions of fruits and vegetables rose for all groups, peaking in 2007.
Women
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had the highest percentage at about 35%,
men
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reached 27%, and
children
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climbed to 20%.
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, in 2008, all groups saw a slight drop, with
women
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at 32%,
men
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at 25%, and
children
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at 18%.
Women
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still remained the top consumers.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men, children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Portion
  • Consumption
  • Fluctuation
  • Trend
  • Campaign
  • Public health
  • Dietary habits
  • Implications
  • Age group
  • Guidelines
  • Five-a-day
  • Nutrition
  • Lifestyle change
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Chart
  • Percentage
  • Data analysis
  • Diet
  • Healthy eating
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