The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie graph illustrates how often Americans went out to eat fast food in a decade between 2003 and 2013.
Overall
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, the statistics maintained over the years with little variation.
Firstly
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, is noticeable that there was almost the same proportion of people in the USA that went every day as had never been to any cheap restaurant, with only a 1% of the difference between them.
Moreover
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, in 2003 both reached the greatest amount by 4% and 5%, respectively.
Secondly
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, a portion between 13-15% of the population preferred to go a few times a year, back in 2003, fewer of them went out.
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, those who rather ate that type of food several times a week were nearly a fifth of the total in 2006 but never dropped below 16%.
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, mostly of Americans ate it once a week between 2003 and 2006;
however
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, the trend changed and in 2013 they chose to do it once or twice a month, hitting a peak in around 33% of the population. To summarize, in that decade citizens of the United States of America really liked to eat cheap food up to a third of them the ones who do it once a week in 2003-2006 and once or twice a month in 2013.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • frequency
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • stabilize
  • decline
  • highlight
  • reduction
  • reliance
  • eating habits
  • population segment
  • weekly basis
  • rarely
  • initial decrease
  • dine
  • establishments
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