You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter offer to make a popular dish from your country describe what this dish is explain why it should be included in the event Begin your letter as follows
Dear Luis,
I am excited that there will be an
event
upcoming and I am writing to discuss Use synonyms
about
my involvement in Remove the preposition
apply
this
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event
.
I would like to contribute by making a traditional food Use synonyms
name
Momo. Replace the word
named
This
food is quite complicated to prepare and takes Linking Words
lot
of time Change the article
a lot
ro
cook. I learned Correct your spelling
to
this
dish when I was Linking Words
teenager
. My mom used to Add an article
a teenager
taught
me, I preserved it since Change the verb form
teach
then
.
Momo is Linking Words
the
Change the article
apply
savory
and spicy in taste. To prepare Change the spelling
savoury
this
food. Linking Words
Firstly
, meat should be marinated for at least half an hour after that Linking Words
need
to include onion, ginger, Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
garlic
Correct word choice
and garlic
with
seasoned like masala, spices and all. At Change preposition
apply
last
, we have to boil Linking Words
for
10, Correct pronoun usage
it for
15
minutes and it is ready.
In my perspective, momo will be an excellent Change preposition
to 15
additional
Replace the word
addition
for
the Change preposition
to
event
because many people Use synonyms
gets
Change the verb form
get
opportunity
to try it Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
as well
Linking Words
as
though it is renowned, my classmates are eagerly waiting to try Correct word choice
and
this
in an Linking Words
event
.
I look forward to hearing from you and I am able to discuss Use synonyms
further
on Linking Words
this
matter.
Thank you
Sachin GurungLinking Words
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coherence cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, ensure that each paragraph sticks to a single idea and transitions smoothly between ideas.
task achievement
Consider adding more detail to enhance the explanation of why the dish is important.
task achievement
The letter maintains a warm tone suitable for writing to a fellow club member.
coherence cohesion
The closing of the letter is appropriate and polite, offering further discussion.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,