The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

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The table depicts the data of five variant

countries

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and

percentage

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the percentage

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of national consumer spending by category in 2002.

Overall

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, It is evident that all the

countries

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had

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apply

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spent least on the Leisure/Education but

spain

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Spain

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had

the

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minimun

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minimum

percentage less than 2 per cent.

On the other hand

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peope

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people

had

used

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spent

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most of their income on Food/Drink/

Tabacco

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Tobacco

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with the highest

spenting

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spending

was

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being

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Turkey, with 32.14 per cent. It can be clearly seen in the chart that Ireland, Italy and Spain had three times

expenses

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the expenses

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for

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Clothing/Footwear as compared to Leisure/Education with 6.43, 9 and 6.51

percentage

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per cent

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respectively.

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While

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apply

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apply

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Sweden and Turkey had

invest

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invested

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slightly less than two times

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Clothes/Footwear as compared to Leisure/ Education which was 3.22

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percent

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per cent

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and 4.35

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percent

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per cent

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accordingly

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respectively

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Moreover

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, the

countries

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like Turkey and Ireland had the highest

figuers

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figures

figure

for Food/Drinks/Tabacco, with 32.14

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percent

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per cent

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and 28.91

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percent

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per cent

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respectively.

Whereas

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, Sweden

was having

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had

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the least spending on Food/Drinks/

Tabacco

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Tobacco

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and Clothing/Footwear among all the

above mentioned

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above-mentioned

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countries

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, with 15.77 and 5.40

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percent

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per cent

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, percent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
28
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

167 words

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