You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say •Thanks them for supporting you. •Describe how you spend your time. •Explain about your recovery process.

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Dear friends, I hope you

guys

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are doing well. I'm writing to thank all of you for sending me greetings and gift

gards

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cards

guards

. Your blessings

are meant

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mean

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a lot to me. Honestly, I've no words to thank you

guys

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for assisting me in my hard time. I really appreciate your

hardwork

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work

and efforts you

guys

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put

for

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in for

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me, making

hand made

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handmade

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presents especially woolen

knee caps

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kneecaps

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and socks which will be very useful to keep

myself

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warm in

upcoming

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the upcoming

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winter. Not only

this

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, the homemade food prepared by Anita was amazing and mouth-watering every single day. You

guys

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know how hard it is to stay alone especially when you can't move

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your own. To keep myself busy and productive, I've enrolled

into

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two

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months

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two-month

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cookery course which

is being conduct

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is being conducted

is conducting

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online Monday to

friday

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Friday

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from 8.00 am to 11.00 am.

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I'm spending

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I spend

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my time

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apply

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watching television,

reading

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and reading

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books, and sometimes I try to complete my pending work by calling Rahul after his shift

over

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is over

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. It has already

two

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been two

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weeks

passed

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apply

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since

I've

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started my medicine so I'm feeling quite better than before. My doctor has advised me

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not to put pressure on my leg and

suggest

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suggested

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me bed rest as much as I can. I hope I will get better soon and return to work next month. I wish all you best for our new projects. Once again, I am very

greatful

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grateful

to you

guys

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for helping me and understanding my situation. Yours Regards, Amanjot Kaur.

Submitted by amanjotkaur0303 on Fri Dec 27 2024

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greeting and closing

Try to use a more formal closing such as 'Yours sincerely' instead of 'Yours Regards.'

single idea per paragraph

Ensure each paragraph contains a single main idea to improve clarity.

complete response

The letter appropriately thanks the colleagues and acknowledges their gifts and support.

suitable writing tone

The tone is friendly and appreciative, suitable for the intended audience.

greeting and closing

The letter opens with a warm greeting and concludes with a polite closing.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

250 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

get well soon
heartfelt thanks
overwhelmed by your kindness
lift my spirits
thoughtful gesture
convalescence
immobilized
keeping my mind occupied
binge-watching
immersing myself in books
following doctor’s orders
physical therapy
on the road to recovery
making progress
optimistic about
mentally prepared for
tremendous support

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