You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say •Thanks them for supporting you. •Describe how you spend your time. •Explain about your recovery process.

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Dear friends, I hope you
guys
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are doing well. I'm writing to thank all of you for sending me greetings and gift
gards
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cards
guards

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. Your blessings
are meant
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mean

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a lot to me. Honestly, I've no words to thank you
guys
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

for assisting me in my hard time. I really appreciate your
hardwork
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work

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and efforts you
guys
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put
for
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in for

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me, making
hand made
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handmade

The word hand made seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.

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presents especially woolen
knee caps
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kneecaps

The word knee caps seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.

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and socks which will be very useful to keep
myself
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me

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warm in
upcoming
Correct article usage
the upcoming

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winter. Not only
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, the homemade food prepared by Anita was amazing and mouth-watering every single day. You
guys
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

know how hard it is to stay alone especially when you can't move
by
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on

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your own. To keep myself busy and productive, I've enrolled
into
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on

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two
Correct determiner usage
a

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months
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two-month

The word months doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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cookery course which
is being conduct
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is being conducted
is conducting

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online Monday to
friday
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Friday

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from 8.00 am to 11.00 am.
Additionally
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

,
I'm spending
Wrong verb form
I spend

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb 'm spending. Consider changing it.

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my time
by
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apply

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watching television,
reading
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and reading

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books, and sometimes I try to complete my pending work by calling Rahul after his shift
over
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is over

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. It has already
two
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been two

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weeks
passed
Verb problem
apply

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since
I've
Unnecessary verb
I

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started my medicine so I'm feeling quite better than before. My doctor has advised me
to
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apply

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not to put pressure on my leg and
suggest
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suggested

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me bed rest as much as I can. I hope I will get better soon and return to work next month. I wish all you best for our new projects. Once again, I am very
greatful
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grateful

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to you
guys
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

for helping me and understanding my situation. Yours Regards, Amanjot Kaur.

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greeting and closing
Try to use a more formal closing such as 'Yours sincerely' instead of 'Yours Regards.'
single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph contains a single main idea to improve clarity.
complete response
The letter appropriately thanks the colleagues and acknowledges their gifts and support.
suitable writing tone
The tone is friendly and appreciative, suitable for the intended audience.
greeting and closing
The letter opens with a warm greeting and concludes with a polite closing.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • get well soon
  • heartfelt thanks
  • overwhelmed by your kindness
  • lift my spirits
  • thoughtful gesture
  • convalescence
  • immobilized
  • keeping my mind occupied
  • binge-watching
  • immersing myself in books
  • following doctor’s orders
  • physical therapy
  • on the road to recovery
  • making progress
  • optimistic about
  • mentally prepared for
  • tremendous support
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