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Writing Samples
Band 6

You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say •Thanks them for supporting you. •Describe how you spend your time. •Explain about your recovery process.

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Dear friends, I hope you
guys
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 are doing well. I'm writing to thank all of you for sending me greetings and gift
gards
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cards
guards
. Your blessings
are meant
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mean
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 a lot to me. Honestly, I've no words to thank you
guys
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 for assisting me in my hard time. I really appreciate your
hardwork
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work
 and efforts you
guys
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 put
for
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in for
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 me, making
hand made
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handmade
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 presents especially woolen
knee caps
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kneecaps
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 and socks which will be very useful to keep
myself
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me
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 warm in
upcoming
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the upcoming
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 winter. Not only
this
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, the homemade food prepared by Anita was amazing and mouth-watering every single day. You
guys
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 know how hard it is to stay alone especially when you can't move
by
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on
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 your own. To keep myself busy and productive, I've enrolled
into
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on
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two
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a
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months
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two-month
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 cookery course which
is being conduct
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is being conducted
is conducting
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 online Monday to
friday
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Friday
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 from 8.00 am to 11.00 am.
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,
I'm spending
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I spend
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 my time
by
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watching television,
reading
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and reading
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 books, and sometimes I try to complete my pending work by calling Rahul after his shift
over
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is over
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. It has already
two
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been two
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 weeks
passed
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since
I've
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I
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 started my medicine so I'm feeling quite better than before. My doctor has advised me
to
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not to put pressure on my leg and
suggest
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suggested
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 me bed rest as much as I can. I hope I will get better soon and return to work next month. I wish all you best for our new projects. Once again, I am very
greatful
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grateful
 to you
guys
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 for helping me and understanding my situation. Yours Regards, Amanjot Kaur.

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greeting and closing
Try to use a more formal closing such as 'Yours sincerely' instead of 'Yours Regards.'
single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph contains a single main idea to improve clarity.
complete response
The letter appropriately thanks the colleagues and acknowledges their gifts and support.
suitable writing tone
The tone is friendly and appreciative, suitable for the intended audience.
greeting and closing
The letter opens with a warm greeting and concludes with a polite closing.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • get well soon
  • heartfelt thanks
  • overwhelmed by your kindness
  • lift my spirits
  • thoughtful gesture
  • convalescence
  • immobilized
  • keeping my mind occupied
  • binge-watching
  • immersing myself in books
  • following doctor’s orders
  • physical therapy
  • on the road to recovery
  • making progress
  • optimistic about
  • mentally prepared for
  • tremendous support
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