The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
The two pie charts illustrate the amount of
energy
produced by five distinct Use synonyms
energy
Use synonyms
sources
in France in the years 1995 and 2005, percentage-wise.
Use synonyms
Overall
it is evident that coal and gas accounted for more than half of the total Linking Words
energy
production in both years Use synonyms
while
other Linking Words
sources
produced the least amount of Use synonyms
energy
. Despite that, it is observed that nuclear power and other Use synonyms
sources
nearly doubled in the 10 years from 1995 and 2005.
In 1995, Coal was the leading Use synonyms
energy
producer followed by Gas and Petrol with 29.80 per Use synonyms
cent
, 29.63 per Use synonyms
cent
and 29.27 per Use synonyms
cent
respectively. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, nuclear power and other Linking Words
sources
contributed to only 6.4 % and 4.9 per Use synonyms
cent
of the total Use synonyms
energy
produced in France in 1995.
2005 saw a few notable changes in the Use synonyms
energy
-producing market, with coal and gas rising marginally to about 30.93 % and 30.31 per Use synonyms
cent
respectively Use synonyms
while
nuclear and other Linking Words
sources
jumped to nearly double with 10.10 and 9.10 per Use synonyms
cent
respectively. Petrol Use synonyms
in contrast
saw a decline, occupying only about 19.5 percent of the Linking Words
overall
Linking Words
energy
produced in France by 2005.Use synonyms
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